Date: June 12 2022 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 1: Empty Cart
Really good stuff, eager to see what further unaware situations he can be dragged into. I hope the story continues on when you get the chance.
Author's Response:
Yes yes, soon enough, there will be more to witness
Date: February 13 2022 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 1: Empty Cart
Great job! Will definitely be keeping my eye on this one
Author's Response:
Thank you! Very much so appreciated!
[Report This]Date: February 13 2022 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 1: Empty Cart
This was very good, love the attention to detail. Something that can be very difficult to achieve.
Author's Response:
I appreciate this. This whole bedroom scene was originally going to be just 1.5k words at most, and then what is now gonna be chapter 3 would’ve been part of chapter 2.
However, as I was writing, I checked and didn’t realize that I had already passed 3k words, so it was an unexpected surprise to myself that I wrote as much as I did, but it’s Great cause that means more chapters can happen xP
[Report This]Date: February 12 2022 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 1: Empty Cart
Great start to your story, I can't wait to see what you add next! Lots of awesome fart content so far, I'm looking forward to what you can do with scat content if you decide to take this story down that path.
Author's Response: I appreciate the review and comments. I don’t wanna necessarily spoil any specifics cause I haven’t decided on them yet, but the story will be continuing with booty as the primary topic, so anything involving booty is fair game to appear in future chapters.
Date: February 11 2022 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 1: Empty Cart
You wrote your story in the wrong box and because of that it cannot be enlarged by clicking on the + symbol to the right.
Author's Response:
Hello! The + symbol is working for me. And I just double checked that it was in the correct box. I am uncertain as to why you are having this problem. My chapter notes and story notes which appear before the actual story portion are a couple paragraphs long. Do you think it’s possible that you could’ve accidentally thought that they were part of the main story text?
Otherwise, I don’t really know what else it could be, cause it appears to be functional on my end.