Another very nice arc of this story!

This chapter is everything I hoped for and more! I really love Isstvell and Lyrei now. The internal struggle really fleshed them out, and that pay off when they met with the matriarch was one of the most anime moments in this series (and I loved it). The reckless willingness to die for the freedom of some humans really sold me on them. Im really enjoying the fact that at least some of their kind are evolving to be more "human" for lack of a better word. Gives me "Warm Bodies" vibes. I'm excited to see where this development/conflict takes the plot.

Also looking forward to the development of Elara's psychic powers now that their only lead is gone. Ngl I was kind of hoping she'd learn some powers like the size changing one because having Jim and Clara at the same size was pretty sweet and I feel like that would be a pretty handy ability both recreationally and in combat.

As always I'll look forward to your next update in whichever story that may be. Godspeed!

Hello. I’ve been trying to get into writing lately and I wanted to know if I could set my story in your life in your universe. 

Your ideas are very well fleshed out and the whole world building thing is something you clearly do well.

I was imagining it could have something to do with the people who were captured, frozen and sold. 

This way it wouldn’t impact your story in any way while also setting a good set of rules (such as the aelmari taking a role as peacekeepers, Glalans being troublemakers and war-mongers, and weaponry being just futuristic enough for recoil to still be a concern)

anyway, before I write too much or go on a tangent I really do appreciate your story and I wouldn’t be offended at all if you wanted to be the only one in control of your universe, as I can see having multiple writers in it being a concern.

(In response to your response). Yeah I get your point. I guess the main thing that would keep me from being happy is the fact that I would never truly free as long as I had to ask for permition to do amything. I guess I'd see Jim's adventures as optimal since they aren't carefully curated and are ironically more organic than anything I feel I could get clearance for. I just want to roam free like the mighty buffalo, the call to adventure is too strong to resist.

Also I feel like dating would be kind of tricky unless I got lucky like Jim. It seems like most other species hate the aelmari and I doubt they'd want to live in captivity with me, but if the rest of the aelmari become more 'organic' I guess they wouldn't keep me against my will anymore which would make me open to the possibility of actually getting to know one (assuming they develop the capacity to love romantically) since they would'nt be keeping me against my will.

Btw sorry for going on yet another tangent. This story and its setting are among the most engaging and interesting on this site. It's hard not to imagine yourself there lol.

You're particular talent is fleshing out the tiny guy in each of your tales, from Impossible Bo- I mean Man, to Jake, and to Jim (lot's of J's eh?). Jim I would say is the blue-collar version of Jake. Or Jake is the white-collar version of Jim. It's still a fun archetype you've fleshed out, of the self-assured tiny, and it makes what's happening all around him all the more clever.

The Aelmari are very intriguing. At first, I thought their involvement was an unwelcome twist, since you've set up the catgirl invasion first and it was done all too quickly. But, seeing them develop, dare I say, some humanity, is an incredible caveat you've introduced.

My gripe is subjective, and thus, perhaps nothing significant to consider, but I tend to shy away from haram-like stories. Emotions tend to get scattered, and love polygons can get real messy. But once more, that's a stylistic preference, it's like me complaining that there are too many feet scenes in a Sheograth story. You get what you pay for.

Gotta say human jewelry is up there on the list of things that freak me out and kinda turn me on, but I lean more toward freak me out. I'm really loving Elara as the new harem mate her psychic powers are super interesting. I wonder if her power would be stronger or weaker than a human since I'm assuming that she has some human DNA in her. Either way, I love the powers, I feel like it's kinda a trick up humanity's sleave, or at least it could be in the future. Lyrei and Isstvell and all the other elves too, I absolutely what you're doing with them, with how humanity is rubbing off on them and they are developing more as a species, becoming less like a robot and more like a person it's super fucking cool. Honestly, I'm surprised you don't take commissions or have a Patreon or something like that cause everything that's coming from your head right now is fucking gold.

Elara joins the MC harem- crew or whatever, Neat.  l've a blast reading this saga, you have talent making this up dude, great work like always. 

Kind of went crazy and started reading your back catalog and I have to say I really like your style! This story is one of the most interesting and entertaining I've read by you. At first I was a bit put off by the fact that most of humanity and our protagonist kind of got forced into being pets, but the more I read the more I really started enjoying character interactions between Jim and Clara as their relationship progressed as well as the general epic sci-fi shit going on in the plot. I still resent the Aelmari because of their demeanor but Lyrei and Isstvel are starting to grow on me now that they're developing more human emotions. Maybe they'll understand why humans don't want to be owned and talked down to, as they get further character development. I'm currently rooting for Clara to end up together with Jim officially by the end of this. Really looking forward to the next chapter when or if you update this fantastic story!

Can't describe how awesome this introduction is. I genuinely laugh a lot at the characters antics and interactions, each joke was just perfectly timing/written. 

Good to see your response on my review!

And like Octosquid11 said, and your response to their review, a full smut chapter will be very much enjoyed. 

Bit difficult to have real conversation through the reviews, so hope you on the site discord, and I can give more idea if you want. 

And I eagerly await the next chapter!