Reviewer: Scarlett Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2022 8:49 PM Title: The Queen of Mars Pt 3

I commented on “ Procerita, the Glalan Champion” about how I love the setting because I do. You hit the ball out of the park with this!

Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm working on a general "appendix" post which is just lore and worldbuilding details for anyone else who wants to play around in this setting or just for people who are curious. It's a fun world, what's not to like about a universe of giant aliens?

Reviewer: Lupin Signed [Report This]
Date: April 10 2022 2:27 AM Title: The Queen of Mars Pt 3

This chapter is everything I hoped for and more! I really love Isstvell and Lyrei now. The internal struggle really fleshed them out, and that pay off when they met with the matriarch was one of the most anime moments in this series (and I loved it). The reckless willingness to die for the freedom of some humans really sold me on them. Im really enjoying the fact that at least some of their kind are evolving to be more "human" for lack of a better word. Gives me "Warm Bodies" vibes. I'm excited to see where this development/conflict takes the plot.

Also looking forward to the development of Elara's psychic powers now that their only lead is gone. Ngl I was kind of hoping she'd learn some powers like the size changing one because having Jim and Clara at the same size was pretty sweet and I feel like that would be a pretty handy ability both recreationally and in combat.

As always I'll look forward to your next update in whichever story that may be. Godspeed!

Author's Response:

Lyrei and Isstvell have definitely come a long way, and I think you could call them genuine friends now. While all the Aelmari will slowly become more "human" on continued exposure, not all of them reach the same conclusions, as Shaerra and Brandon show.

Also Elara might learn the size changing ability one day, but it's a fairly advanced technique. Still, Jim and Clara would probably enjoy it if she could figure it out.