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Reviewer: Maned74 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 09 2022 2:43 AM Title: The Queen of Mars Pt 1

Love that genuine moment between Jim and Clara, first time it felt like an actual couple sharing a romantic exchange instead of a passive dominatrix thing.? 

And the developtment between Elara and the rest of the flock is adorable. 




Author's Response: Jim and Clara have a weird relationship, this story being more of an action oriented one romance isn't as much of a focus as it is in a couple of my other stories, but I still try. Glad you're liking the character development so far!

Reviewer: Foxinbox Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 03 2022 5:26 AM Title: The Queen of Mars Pt 1

Gotta say human jewelry is up there on the list of things that freak me out and kinda turn me on, but I lean more toward freak me out. I'm really loving Elara as the new harem mate her psychic powers are super interesting. I wonder if her power would be stronger or weaker than a human since I'm assuming that she has some human DNA in her. Either way, I love the powers, I feel like it's kinda a trick up humanity's sleave, or at least it could be in the future. Lyrei and Isstvell and all the other elves too, I absolutely what you're doing with them, with how humanity is rubbing off on them and they are developing more as a species, becoming less like a robot and more like a person it's super fucking cool. Honestly, I'm surprised you don't take commissions or have a Patreon or something like that cause everything that's coming from your head right now is fucking gold.



Author's Response:

Glad you're having a good time with it. This arc is going to have a lot of jewelry confinement, but I think it'll be fun. The psychic angle is definitely important, though humans don't really know how to use it yet and the only friendly alien with psychic powers keeps accidentally using them to broadcast her dirty fantasies. Elara probably has less psychic potential than a fully trained human, but at the same time her powers are further along in development than say, Jim's. The Aelmari have definitely changed a lot, and part of this arc will hopefully be highlighting just how much they have changed.

Also I don't have a patreon or anything, I'm mostly just writing for fun right now.

Reviewer: Octosquid11 Signed [Report This]
Date: April 02 2022 2:44 AM Title: The Queen of Mars Pt 1

Always a good week when GreenAnon makes a post



Author's Response:

I've got a few stories I kind of jump between, if you like this one you might check out my other ones, I just wrapped up a story arc in Rise of a Supervillain!

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