Date: August 13 2023 5:43 AM Title: The Invasion
Just wanted to say looking forward to the arc of this series maybe a look at human, Galans and aelmarl working together again the archons
Author's Response:
I do intend to continue this one at some point
[Report This]Date: May 08 2022 1:24 AM Title: The Invasion
DeLana is a very interesting character! I honestly do really like her as an antagonist, nice work! She really gave the Archons some style to them. Also McDonalds. Very funny. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked her, as the first Archon we actually get to see I hoped she would make an impression and maybe be a bit different from the antagonists we've seen so far. With this one I think that there's a sense of what the Archons are about and what they're capable of.
[Report This]Date: May 08 2022 1:24 AM Title: The Invasion
DeLana is a very interesting character! I honestly do really like her as an antagonist, nice work! She really gave the Archons some style to them. Also McDonalds. Very funny. Keep up the great work!
[Report This]Date: May 06 2022 11:42 PM Title: The Invasion
Just caught up on this story and every single arc has been an absolute blast. It simultaneously manages to be one of the most fun stories I've ever read on this site while also having surprisingly fleshed out character growth and world building. Can't wait to see what adventure these lovable goofballs go on next.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Glad to hear you liked it, I always have a good time writing the crew's space adventures and I think they've all come a long way since the beginning.
[Report This]Date: April 27 2022 5:23 PM Title: The Invasion
Octosquid here!
The direction with psychic abilities is very interesting, but I see your concern with them. Can’t wait to see what direction you take your story in.
If you ever take your crew to Glalan Prime, I would KILL to write a crossover. If you’d like to discuss that, I’m in the discord server (Penis McAssface)
stay cool, Greenanon!
Author's Response:
I don't have any plans for Glalan Prime right now so consider it your "domain" haha. There are a few other characters from this story on that planet, mostly from the "Unseen Enemies" arc which you can use if you feel like you need them. I'm not on discord, might join at some point in the future.
[Report This]Date: April 27 2022 4:35 PM Title: The Invasion
Oh yeah the other psychic abilities could easily get really op is shrinking and returning to “normal” is but one reality altering ability.
Aslso could totally hsve conversations on the discord server.
[Report This]Date: April 21 2022 10:58 AM Title: The Invasion
Octosquid here!
Alright I’ve got an idea. News is just getting out about Procerita’s fight with the Executioner. The footage from the spaceport had just been found and uploaded. The overhead camera had shown the scene in detail, sending mixed responses among our main group. The footage ends with Procerita stealing the Aelmari ship.
Author's Response: Yeah that's kind of what I was thinking, just a quick commentary, from Clara mostly, about how it's possible to beat an Aelmari in personal combat.
Date: April 18 2022 2:48 AM Title: The Invasion
Just a follow up on my post I was thinking on using a holstaur for the story to focus around with a human that gets abducted before the events of the invasion and then follow along the time line and beyond
Author's Response:
Sounds fun, I don't think I have a Holstaur type species yet so you're pretty free to go in whatever direction you want, looking forward to it!
Date: April 17 2022 6:35 PM Title: The Invasion
Hi I read your story and I wad wondering if I can right a story based on your world on wattpad
Author's Response:
Go for it, I would appreciate if you could post here too since I'm not on wattpad and I'd love to read it! There is a series page here that I think you should be able to add stories to.
[Report This]Date: April 10 2022 3:30 AM Title: The Invasion
Thanks for the mention! It’s been fantastic having your feedback and as I have mentioned before, an honour to write in your universe. I can’t wait to see the crew go to space Vegas!
Author's Response:
Thanks! It's an honor that someone likes it enough that they want to write in it
[Report This]Date: April 08 2022 1:31 AM Title: The Invasion
Hello. I’ve been trying to get into writing lately and I wanted to know if I could set my story in your life in your universe.
Your ideas are very well fleshed out and the whole world building thing is something you clearly do well.
I was imagining it could have something to do with the people who were captured, frozen and sold.
This way it wouldn’t impact your story in any way while also setting a good set of rules (such as the aelmari taking a role as peacekeepers, Glalans being troublemakers and war-mongers, and weaponry being just futuristic enough for recoil to still be a concern)
anyway, before I write too much or go on a tangent I really do appreciate your story and I wouldn’t be offended at all if you wanted to be the only one in control of your universe, as I can see having multiple writers in it being a concern.
Author's Response:
Just go for it, treat the existing story as a basic canon and if you need to make up technology or species to make your story work then go wild. The only thing I ask is don't touch the Archons since they're mind "endgame" plot if that makes sense. Other than that I'm looking forward to what you come up with, I left the series as "open" so I think anyone can add to it, unless I've misunderstood how series work on this site.
[Report This]Date: April 08 2022 1:30 AM Title: The Invasion
Hello. I’ve been trying to get into writing lately and I wanted to know if I could set my story in your life in your universe.
Your ideas are very well fleshed out and the whole world building thing is something you clearly do well.
I was imagining it could have something to do with the people who were captured, frozen and sold.
This way it wouldn’t impact your story in any way while also setting a good set of rules (such as the aelmari taking a role as peacekeepers, Glalans being troublemakers and war-mongers, and weaponry being just futuristic enough for recoil to still be a concern)
anyway, before I write too much or go on a tangent I really do appreciate your story and I wouldn’t be offended at all if you wanted to be the only one in control of your universe, as I can see having multiple writers in it being a concern.
Author's Response:
Just go for it, treat the existing story as a basic canon and if you need to make up technology or species to make your story work then go wild. The only thing I ask is don't touch the Archons since they're my"endgame" plot if that makes sense. Other than that I'm looking forward to what you come up with, I left the series as "open" so I think anyone can add to it, unless I've misunderstood how series work on this site.
Date: April 07 2022 1:49 PM Title: The Invasion
(In response to your response). Yeah I get your point. I guess the main thing that would keep me from being happy is the fact that I would never truly free as long as I had to ask for permition to do amything. I guess I'd see Jim's adventures as optimal since they aren't carefully curated and are ironically more organic than anything I feel I could get clearance for. I just want to roam free like the mighty buffalo, the call to adventure is too strong to resist.
Also I feel like dating would be kind of tricky unless I got lucky like Jim. It seems like most other species hate the aelmari and I doubt they'd want to live in captivity with me, but if the rest of the aelmari become more 'organic' I guess they wouldn't keep me against my will anymore which would make me open to the possibility of actually getting to know one (assuming they develop the capacity to love romantically) since they would'nt be keeping me against my will.
Btw sorry for going on yet another tangent. This story and its setting are among the most engaging and interesting on this site. It's hard not to imagine yourself there lol.
Author's Response:
Your Aelmari Guardian(s) would set you up with some comically simple mission like "pick up the box" and it would escalate into some massive life or death scenario involving space bee-girls and foxes, then you'd have some alien giantess working for the space mafia who would have a Catwoman style frenemy relationship with you. That's just how things work in the Conquest of Earth universe.
Date: March 16 2022 1:31 PM Title: The Invasion
Can't describe how awesome this introduction is. I genuinely laugh a lot at the characters antics and interactions, each joke was just perfectly timing/written.
Author's Response:
Thanks! Pretty high praise. The first chapter "The Invasion" was originally meant as a one shot but people wanted more so I provided.
[Report This]Date: March 06 2022 4:21 AM Title: The Invasion
Good to see your response on my review!
And like Octosquid11 said, and your response to their review, a full smut chapter will be very much enjoyed.
Bit difficult to have real conversation through the reviews, so hope you on the site discord, and I can give more idea if you want.
And I eagerly await the next chapter!
Date: February 28 2022 8:58 PM Title: The Invasion
love it and can't wait for more. Want more insertion though with lots of detail but keep it up!
[Report This]Date: February 11 2022 9:59 PM Title: The Invasion
This started as a simple aliens and elves story, which is my kryptonite, and it even had a fun twist. And it's become a rather earnest and well written science fantasy that's more than a silly wank.
It's been such a delight to binge these first three chapters. I'mma check out your other stuff immediately. Thanks for your efforts :)
Which board may I find you on, anon?
Author's Response:
Thanks I'm glad you liked it! I'd like to come back and continue some more space adventures with these characters at some point. I'm on the gentle giantess thread on /d/ a lot.
[Report This]Date: February 11 2022 6:29 AM Title: The Invasion
Interesting story so far, am looking forward for more.