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Reviewer: bigfly20 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2022 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 7: Amateur Hour

Really awesome chapter! The story is amazing. I can’t wait to see what the shots bring.

I do wonder if Erika gave such a good performance for the amateur hour that people want an encore. Will Marc happen to be on her so he might actually feel those colossal tits like they were an entire city?

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I didn't do anything sizey with the shots, but I think it will still make for a fun adventure for the main character.

I hope you enjoy the next chapter!

Reviewer: Da Boss Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 05 2022 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 7: Amateur Hour

Pretty good chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 04 2022 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 7: Amateur Hour

Another good chapter!



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: Tantro Signed [Report This]
Date: May 04 2022 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 7: Amateur Hour

Amazing story! Each new chapter is a joyfull experience! Really keeps you on the edge of your sit to see whats is next. 

Will be awaiting a new update! Hope they eventually get bigger; or a malfunction that make one dancer bigger than the stage or unable to shrink; steal the tech for out world shenanigans; maybe a new world order! Keep them growing!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it!

I actually wanted this one to mostly focus on the club on a "regular night".

I have a sequel in mind that will probably touch on some of those themes you mentioned here. I want to write a few other stories I have in mind before I come back to this though, so keep an eye out!

(I might put a very short Epilogue chapter out later this week to better hint towards the sequel.)

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