[Report This]Date: February 21 2022 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 4: The Bachelor Bus
I really enjoy this concept, especially the thought of shrinking to tiny size on a 50 foot woman's sandal or shoe! The mix of giant and micro sizes is great, and I love this Bachellor Bus!
Imagine driving down the length of a 50 foot woman's body in that thing and it keeps shrinking as it goes so the distance keeps getting larger as it gets closer to her toes, and by the end of it they're stranded on her toenail helplessly watching a gemstone grow to the size of a mountain!
Author's Response:
Thanks! The mix of sizes is what inspired me to write this story to begin with. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
[Report This]Date: February 19 2022 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 4: The Bachelor Bus
Another good chapter!
Another idea, the club can get actual used or slated to be destroyed vehicles, cars, buses, trains, plains etc. and girls use them obviously. Could be used in a rampage set, some kind of chase where the girls try and get the customer in a shrunken vehicles, or must watch them crush said shrunken vehicles. Might be interesting world-building to know what/if there are issues or differences in training are for such stuff, cause broken car glass at that inside soft tissue is probably not health if done wrong.
And if they can all go that small, I bet that helps with city scale sets, or thinks that would normally take up and impractical amount of room/space.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
I really like your suggestion! I didn't use it for this story, but I might play with this idea when I get around to a sequel for this story that I'm planning.