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Reviewer: Feeover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2023 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

Great story, loved the concept and the characters. 

One of the best stories i've seen here



Author's Response:

Thank you! This means a lot to me. :)

Reviewer: akilmilo Signed [Report This]
Date: September 07 2022 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

I loved wife foot scene,

Wife "cute laughter" scene,

Angela at the start of private hour asserting her dominance(butt flick and edging the couple)

And Rocio revenge scene.





Author's Response:

Thank you! Those were some of my favorite scenes to write!

Reviewer: grael Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 09 2022 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

This is a great story. Can't wait to see what comes next.



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: unknown1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 09 2022 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

One of the best stories I've ever read with the addition of chapter 5



Author's Response:

That means a lot, thank you very much!

Reviewer: Pok420 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 12 2022 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

I hope this continues this is one of the best stories going right now is it your 1st here? It's so amazing talent



Author's Response:

Thank you, I appreciate the kind words.

I'm a long time lurker, first time contributor!

Reviewer: Pok420 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 11 2022 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

Keep writing I will check back every day for an update for this it is a very promising story



Author's Response:

Sorry to keep you waiting for so long, but I finally got around to publishing the final chapter.

Reviewer: DcZ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 11 2022 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 1: Arrival

Absolutely excelent!

Can’t wait for more chapters!


Only adition I can think of, and from ehat you have you still have a tone to work with as you want, is that some of the girls might have wedge shoes that are hollow so that other girls can be inside them. When the girld wearing the heels is a giantess, thes a smaller girls just dancing and such inside (possibly even normal sized), and when small, just knowing is hot. Or visitors could take a ride in them themselves.Perhaps there is even a part of the glub that lets women rent out such hollow wedge heels to wear at the club. 

Otherwise, your doing great!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words and the feedback!

I like your idea and could definitely see some of the girls doing this!

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