[Report This]Date: March 31 2024 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 12
One thing I’ve always thought that’s a cool idea are alternate endings. A great story has multiple points in it where the story can take a drastic turn, and I’m surprised no one has written alternate endings for any of the classics yet. Would love to see some alternate endings as a way to keep this story going, or even a sequel that happens a few weeks after this in another round of rf29. Maybe the drugs weren’t made correctly, and it alters the characters slightly? Brilliant story btw! Loved every chapter!
[Report This]Date: March 18 2024 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great story! I'm loving it. I would love to see more mouth play and potentially some vore. It'd be hot for his sister to get too drunk to realize she swallowed when doing some mouth play
[Report This]Date: March 12 2024 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 10
Definitely a hot and fun story!
Gonna echo some others, would be really fun to see some instances where someone screws up and gets unfathomably small (ideally a girl!) in future installments. Especially if it happens right infront of others...
Date: March 09 2024 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 9
Nice. I really hope something goes wrong with the dose, and he becomes much smaller then he is expecting. Like maybe one sixteenth his current size, making him tiny to sara and minuscule to the others. Especially if after he and sara has some fun he ends up lost on the body of one of the others.
Author's Response:
The stories finished but I haven't put it all out there yet. I love your ideas but you'll just have to wait and see. I had meant to write other follow on stories so some of the ideas being floated here may show up. If after this is finished, you can all tell me your ideas to put in future stories I can probably work them in. The ideas I have concern other characters that make cameo appearances here. If you've read the story so far you already know of them. I can imagine a lot of scenarios for our protagonist here.
Anyway, keep the ideas coming. I may not work them in here since the story is already finished, but in follow up stories, if I decide to do it, they could very easily find their way into those.
[Report This]Date: March 07 2024 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 7
I’m kinda hoping that Matt somehow gets permanently shrunk and Miranda decides to keep him.
Love this story so far! Can’t wait til the next chapter
Date: March 06 2024 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet the Players
Not sure how I've missed this story so far but I freaking love it! Hopefully the next chapter comes quick! Well done!
Author's Response:
Thanks for encouraging words. This was finished long ago but I neglected posting the chapters after I went on a business trip and sort of forgot all about it. But I will finish this off soon so stay tuned.
Date: March 06 2024 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 7
Careful. Those last two lines seem like tempting fate. You don't want something happening to stop you two from growing back. Or being inserted when you two grow back and end up trapped inside the bigger ones.
Author's Response:
As the last line says, the night's still young ... I'll be putting up more chapters real soon now.
[Report This]Date: October 16 2023 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Enjoying it
I hope you choose to come back to this story, it's one of my all time favorites!
[Report This]Date: July 19 2022 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Enjoying it
This whole concept is so good, and I can't wait to see what plot twist is coming in the next chapter.
Really hoping you still plan to finish this, keep it up!
Date: February 19 2022 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Enjoying it
I wonder if they were mislabeled or his sister used the wrong one.... he could end up a lot smaller then before the night is over or not grow back when everyone else does... This could be a real party!
Author's Response:
Well now that's an interesting proposition. Just remember, the night is far from over at this point.
Date: February 19 2022 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet the Players
I like what you're doing with the story. It's pretty interesting and I am curious to see where it goes.
A piece of constructive criticism I'd like to give is that you have long stretches of dialogue which isn't inherently bad, good dialogue is important for a story like this. But, I'd advise you to add some descriptors in there to spice it up like Kelly smiling or Matt looked away. Something to add more flavor to the flow.
[Report This]Date: February 13 2022 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 3 - A New Turn
Things are really heating up! Here is to our friends utter LOSS in the next hand!
[Report This]Date: February 04 2022 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet the Players
A very potent setup! Hope he's rather unlucky at cards while the girls get tipsy and kinky.
Author's Response:
Thanks. We'll see what happens when the cards are laid out. ;)
[Report This]Date: February 03 2022 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Meet the Players
Looking forward to this one. Sounds really interesting especially because there are siblings involved
Author's Response:
The siblings appear not only for this story but to set up for more stories. I'm not sure if they'll ever get posted since I'm still working on them, but let me know if that's what you want; just wait for this one to finish to see if that's what you like.
I have bunch of stories I've been working on and it would help to know what everyone would like.