Date: January 11 2022 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 1
You have the foundation for endless scenarios involving shrunken {??? you never mentioned his name. Nice touch. I do that in my stories so anybody can imagine being the tiny one.}. You basically gave yourself a never ending shrunken slave series, and so far a nice one at that.
It was pretty easy to guess the mother would be the first recipient; though her paying her daughter for his use seems like it would be odd. I mean how many mothers rent their daughter's living slave? Wouldn't that just be a present for her mom? Then after that, the renting out to other women and money making begins.
As far as your grammar and English in general, you write it pretty darn well for it not being your first language. The mistakes you make are negligible, and your story reads easily not withstanding the simple errors.
The content and style of your writing far outshines any miss-worded sentences you write. In fact, you are probably better at writing than many whose first language is English. Kudos to who ever taught you English.
Can't wait to read future chapters.