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Reviewer: Milla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2022 2:04 PM Title: Pushing Boundries

I loved how Autumn just stepped on him, crushing his body, just to look disgustily at him believing he's dead and seeing he's still alive, what an unexpected and rare event! She even felt guilty for what she did, lol!

And she swallowed her 'guilty', a very nice way to deal with it! Nicely done!



Author's Response: Thanks so much! I felt it really played with her character. She an apathetic brat, but she isn't a sociopath! Even the cruelest people would probably feel guilty seeing somebody they once loved all broken like that.

Reviewer: Shaman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2022 2:03 PM Title: Pushing Boundries

I love the way she so easily discards of him in the end. All in all, a really good story again Zude!:) *applause*

Author's Response:

Thanks so much Shaman! :)

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2021 4:47 AM Title: Pushing Boundries

Aside from the almost cuckold aspect {not into some guy more interest than me or getting what I am not; but that's just me} you have a pretty good story.

I especially like when Autumn realizes she has abused Aiden to a point of no return and simply swallows him.

Aiden's shrunken size is a bit confusing though.  From the size of an ant to the size of a piece of gum, just how small is he?

Regardless, a very enjoyable story and look forward to more of your work.



Author's Response:

Great feedback, really appreciate you taking the time to give some, and I'm especially glad you enjoyed it!

 Aiden is about an inch in height! I definitely agree with the criticism, I should have been much more clear on his size. I like leaving it slightly vague, but it was too much in this case.

Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: December 30 2021 9:58 PM Title: Pushing Boundries

1st a note: everything from "An original story wrote on commission." to "https://ko-fi.com/rudezude" is written in a color that for me at least is basically unreadable (near white on a white background...)




That being said, I can see why somebody paid for this, good job!




Author's Response:

Appreciate you letting me know! I wasn't aware it was so hard to read!

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