Reviewer: santiago1985 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 30 2012 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 1

I like it a lot.

¿Will you go on with it?

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26 2009 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 1

A pretty good opener. Although, I'm a little confused. I thought Carol's friend was Kathy. And, that Katie is the mutual friend of Samantha and Jordan who got them half-drunk.

Also, you had Samantha addressing _Jordan_ as Samantha, when the former told the latter not to step on the shrinkees! What, as they say, gives?

Author's Response: Ahh!  You have found me out.  I'll have to go back and do some editing.  Thanks for letting me know.