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Reviewer: Raso719 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2023 6:15 PM Title: Part 6 - Chapter 3

Had me in the first half, not gonna lie.

Little sisters shrinking their big sister is super fun and I hope it's something you explore again. Maybe more day dreams so we can see multiple other scenarios. 


Would absolutely love to see something like she shrinks a girl so much the remote loses track of the target. The implication being she shrank too small to track or out of existence... maybe she gets addicted to do it?



Author's Response:

Hey thanks for your feedback. Glad you enjoyed this and found it fun. I was deliberating over either Grace having a guy over and has some fun with him or perhaps one of her sister's girlfriends who has always bullied Grace intrudes and gets accidentally shrunken... not sure yet which way to go, but had some ideas like that. Could always do both I suppose, welcome thoughts from people.

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