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Reviewer: lovergiantess7 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2023 8:21 AM Title: Part 4 - Chapter 3

Fricking amazing! love this series. Have you written more? Can't wait to see what happens next. Can you do some gentle feeding where she feeds him stuff, would be great to see how their "relationship" evolves, perhaps he starts to like her or something?

Would be great to see what happens about her sister as well, does she find out? What happens with the shrinking machine that was stolen? I HAVE SO MANY QUESTIONS! :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks very much, really appreciate your candid feedback. Yes, I have written a bit more of this story. I'm thinking about doing a poll about what should happen next, perhaps you could take part in that poll if you like?

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