[Report This]Date: January 02 2024 4:45 AM Title: Part 6 - Chapter 4
Oooo is Grace about to realize she's been mean to Dan or is she shook by his audacity. I wonder what will happen...
I'm still hoping to see Grace be really irresponsible and shrink someone way too small or something....
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, yes I've been toying with what happens next, and perhaps Grace gets drunk and does something irresponsible, that is a possible scenario... I was thinking about perhaps one of Annabelle's girlfriends comes to visit, or something...
[Report This]Date: December 20 2023 6:15 PM Title: Part 6 - Chapter 3
Had me in the first half, not gonna lie.
Little sisters shrinking their big sister is super fun and I hope it's something you explore again. Maybe more day dreams so we can see multiple other scenarios.
Would absolutely love to see something like she shrinks a girl so much the remote loses track of the target. The implication being she shrank too small to track or out of existence... maybe she gets addicted to do it?
Author's Response:
Hey thanks for your feedback. Glad you enjoyed this and found it fun. I was deliberating over either Grace having a guy over and has some fun with him or perhaps one of her sister's girlfriends who has always bullied Grace intrudes and gets accidentally shrunken... not sure yet which way to go, but had some ideas like that. Could always do both I suppose, welcome thoughts from people.
[Report This]Date: September 29 2023 2:11 PM Title: Part 1 - Chapter 1
Absolutely love this story, can't wait to read more. I love how close Annabelle was to her shrunken boyfriend without knowing and Grace has him captured in the room opposite and she is none the wiser. Can't wait to see what happens next...
Author's Response:
Great to hear, thank you for your feedback and support, much appreciated! It might get even a bit closer with the shrinkee, in Annabelle's possession closer and closer to Grace...
[Report This]Date: August 09 2023 12:31 PM Title: Part 4 - Chapter 4
I think Grace should have Daniel play with her nipple. Either where he cums inside it or inserts his dick and than put a bra to keep him there. Let them recharge with some time there before going at it again.
Like the story.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the feedback and interesting ideas
[Report This]Date: June 07 2023 8:21 AM Title: Part 4 - Chapter 3
Fricking amazing! love this series. Have you written more? Can't wait to see what happens next. Can you do some gentle feeding where she feeds him stuff, would be great to see how their "relationship" evolves, perhaps he starts to like her or something?
Would be great to see what happens about her sister as well, does she find out? What happens with the shrinking machine that was stolen? I HAVE SO MANY QUESTIONS! :-)
Author's Response:
Thanks very much, really appreciate your candid feedback. Yes, I have written a bit more of this story. I'm thinking about doing a poll about what should happen next, perhaps you could take part in that poll if you like?
[Report This]Date: July 02 2022 2:30 PM Title: Part 2 - Chapter 1
Wow! Great story and thank you for sharing.
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you enjoyed it, thanks for the feedback.
There is more on the way!
Date: December 26 2021 5:09 AM Title: Part 1 - Chapter 2
Very Hot! But what about Annabella, the sister he likes? Will he give Annabella up for Grace?
Is Grace going to swallow him, alive? If so, will he stay alive inside Grace's bowels?
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you liked this first part. Please visit my Patreon to see what happens to him, Grace and Annabelle...
What might Annabelle do when she comes back home drunk and sees this wierd machine in her room? Investigate the machine, work out what it does or pass out drunk?....