[Report This]Date: January 01 2022 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 5: Endgame
"This chapter contains sex, profanity and astrophysics!" - I laughed harder than this than anyone ever should.
“-Could stop her Goddess wife from biting this very planet in half if he chose” - Shouldn't that be a "his Goddess wife"?
I didn't expect Mio to be something alike Alice/Tom's "Silver Surfer".(Even the eating the Planet-thing fits that Galactus-like Narrative.) But it's more fun if they didn't directly create their latest toy, I guess...
I don't know what's meaner. Alice just stealing a star or Tom annihilating anything with a hell-lot of a delay.
Author's Response:
“-Could stop her Goddess wife from biting this very planet in half if he chose” - Shouldn't that be a "his Goddess wife"?
Another embarrassing error! Fixed now.
I didn't expect Mio to be something alike Alice/Tom's "Silver Surfer".(Even the eating the Planet-thing fits that Galactus-like Narrative.) But it's more fun if they didn't directly create their latest toy, I guess...
"Silver Surfer" - I like that reference! I am in the process of writing the chapter on how Mio joined them...