[Report This]Date: December 06 2021 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 2: A Goddess’s Game
This site could really use an alarm function of sorts...
"Little Tiny Tom, Tiny Admiral of a tiny fleet." - I would've used "Teeny Tiny Tom, Mini Admiral of a flimsy fleet." but that may be just me.
"soliciting" I just learned a new vocable.
Was Mio already in the first part? Tow Japanese Women appeared but I don't remember their names...
Another great Chapter but it surprised me that it wasn't written from Alice's Perspective - or do I misremember the original switching between the two each chapter?
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"Teeny Tiny Tom, Mini Admiral of a flimsy fleet." I like it. I should of used that one...
Mio wasn't in part 1 of this story. I recall some Japanese women at the end of the first Game of Sizes but I think they were both throwaways.
The story perspective will shift to Alice after a few chapters. This time around I am going for long spells from the perspective of one character. Bit of a change of style, maybe I'll go back to alternating later.