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Reviewer: Milla Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 12 2022 10:58 AM Title: Any old Pout in a Storm

Now I'm wondering... the young - and now tiny - Kenneth meets the young - not as younger as him - Colleen. She probably knows the 'legend' about the leprechauns, and suddenly sees a tiny boy. And has no problem showing himself her mouth when he asks for it...

What if it was Kenneth himself, in Colleen's past, who made her start enjoying the idea of eating tinies - leprechauns mostly? Interesting concept lol. Maybe if he just asked her to help him she'd do it and not show him her mouth, never coming to enjoy the idea of gobbling him (and other tinies) down her belly... what makes Kenneth the only responsible for the event he's actually trying to stop in the future.

Ok, I'm wondering too much! Back to waiting for the next chapter...



Author's Response:

You've been watching those science fictions about predestination paradoxes. I like to think, that on the original timeline, Kenneth hadn't sent his consciousness back in time yet. So Colleen's interest in leprechauns developed without this incident.

However, I do use the predestination time loop approach in a much later batch of chapters involving a new character. So you'll get to see it both ways.

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