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Reviewer: GhostWriter44 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27 2022 7:28 PM Title: Part III: For A Lunch Date

Oh my goodness, this was amazing!! This honestly is one of my favorite stories on here and I thoroughly enjoyed every update so far. Sad that it seems this will be the last chapter for a while, based on the end chapter notes. But I do really really hope we get more of this story in the future! Perfectly hits a lot of my very specific interests lol



Author's Response:

Hey! I'm so glad to hear you say that, as well as just being super relieved! I've been pretty nervous about each of these chapters, as they're quite reserved in comparison to much of my writing, but if they're working for you, that makes it all worth it!

Well, the hope is I'll only be off this story for a while, as it's quite hard and draining to keep on top of the characterisation of each girl, but I definitely intend on coming back to it, so don't you worry. As a matter of fact, I'd love to hear what's working so well about this story for you if you had the time at any point, given that could well serve to better realise what people like and dislike about what I've written so far. My Discord is Randomer000#0916 in case you were interested!

Until then, all the best and I hope you'll like what I've got coming up soon!

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