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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 09 2021 10:37 AM Title: Part II: For The Day To Come

Always great to see more Sarah.

Author's Response:

Always happy to write more of her; and something tells me this won't be the last you'll see of her either ;)

Thanks so much for the review, and glad you're still enjoying it!

Reviewer: GiantessLover21 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 08 2021 11:02 PM Title: Part II: For The Day To Come

Good chapter can't wait for the 3rd one. I like the change in this chapter 

Author's Response:

That's really fantastic to hear, and I'm glad you're still enjoying it!

The third chapter might be a couple weeks away still, as I don't want to rush things, but if I can get certain aspects right it should be a really interesting direction for things to take. Again, different from the two you've seen so far, but aiming to develop things a little more broadly. After all, we know Sarah pretty well now, and I think it might be fun to compare her treatment of tinies to that of her friends'...

Thanks for the continued support, and hope to see you back here again soon!

Reviewer: Sernos Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 08 2021 6:14 PM Title: Part II: For The Day To Come

This is easily one of the best new stories I've read in many years. Both chapters are great, and I think the variety between them only adds to it. Looking forward to chapter 3!



Author's Response:

You're far too kind, mate!

I really do appreciate it and I'm glad to hear you think so, especially in terms of the variety aspect. I did worry a bit when writing this new part that it might turn a few people off the story, given the shift in pace/content, however I think it's important to really establish who Sarah is before moving forward and I'm pleased it seems to have worked for the most part.

And I'm looking forward to everyone getting the chance to see where things go from here!

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