Reviews For Forsaken
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Reviewer: redfoot Signed [Report This]
Date: November 16 2021 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 1

This story is absolutely brilliant - love her wicked plan, and can't wait to see her become his one true God.

Not a huge fan of unaware so hope she'll still interact a little with him, even if speaking to the room in general rather than to the little bug specifically.

Keep up the brilliant work :)

Reviewer: SlashMaster Signed [Report This]
Date: November 15 2021 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 1

I sent you a message on deviantart just so you know

Reviewer: SlashMaster Signed [Report This]
Date: November 14 2021 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 1

Do you do commissions?

Author's Response:

I'd certainly be keen to discuss it further. I don't think this site has messenger so drop me a line at https://www.deviantart.com/n1gmat1c

Reviewer: sticktoyourguns256 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2021 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

You do such an amazing job conveying the scale here. The interactions are straightforward but her attitude and your descriptions are what really well it. Nice work!

Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: November 13 2021 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 2

I seldom finish posting stories I begin writing, but I want to give credit to where credit is due.

You gave me the idea of a female forensic scientists stumbles upon tiny murder victims.  Should I ever write this story, or should you or somebody else write it, let it be known you were the inspiration.

As to your story, quite fast paced, which is often nice; but could both of them agree on something more than a quick and unnoticed death beneath her Goddess Ass?

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 13 2021 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 2

Such a lucky nerd

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