Date: December 18 2021 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great story! I love the descriptions from Rick's perspective.
Thank you, Underfoottiny.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Glad you like my story.
Date: December 18 2021 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great story! I love the descriptions from Rick's perspective.
Thank you, Underfoottiny.
Date: December 18 2021 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 5
Another good chapter!
Loved all the scenes so far. That Bonnie scene was actually interesting. Almost feels like Bonnie is a completely different person. Lol.
The fun at Kay’s house felt a little short. Reminded me of those times I visited friends during the day and time just flew by. Then when I had sleepovers, it felt like a lot more time.
Maybe that’s what’s gotta happen next. Rick needs another sleepover and with his current size, I think it could be a great idea. ;)
I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Glad you’re enjoying the story. Rick will have time with them. Time may present itself in unexpected ways.