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Reviewer: Mr E Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 04 2010 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 7

I Love it.  everytime he thinks hes got it good, something bad happens.  id love to see a continuation on this

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 13 2009 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 7

HA! What a brilliant plot-twist!

Although, I have to wonder if Elena's abducting him was motivated more by the thought of having a permanent foot-slave, than protecting her daughter? ;-)

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