Date: March 14 2022 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Mother Knows Best
This is gold my friend. You are a magician with words, the way you depict the situation! how the conversation lads to a misunderstanding! the mother slowly being corrupted to this newfound pleasure! I am hyped and so glad I found this incredibly well written story! Thank you much for writing this <3
I'd would have liked more backstory, something like a prologue explaining their life and relationships before the shrinking and the progress towards becoming a stress ball, but hey its still incredibly good!
Haha, well said- and no problem, I aim to make enjoyable content. I'm glad to hear it. There could have been a bit of backstory, but as this was a commission request for the original idea, I didn't want to dally too much before getting into the "action" as it were. It seems the overall goal of the scenario still gets through well enough though so I'm pleased with that!
Date: January 07 2022 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 1: Mother Knows Best
mis una buena historia me encantó la relación de madre eh hijo y como juegan con los diálogos y posibilidades en especial la parte donde se preguntan en qué parte del cuerpo de la madre meterán al pequeño hijo