[Report This]Date: September 28 2021 5:11 AM Title: Broken Rule
Wow, this is extremely well written! You're doing a fantastic job with your descriptions, it's really evocative. I'm also definitely very interested in the setting and characters, particularly your two mains. I'm curious as to what Sarah's deal is, and if there's anything more to her than pure cruelty. I'm also extremely curious as to how she's going to interact with the protagonist. I think the actual erotic content might be a bit too cruel for my personal taste, but that's purely due to my own preferences, the setting is more then enough to keep me interested. Great story so far, and I'm really looking forward to more! Take care.
-Pluto
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I've been trying to be really descriptive so it means a lot that it was am enjoyable aspect of the story. I really appreciate the review and I definitely have plans to add more from Sarah's side. The cruel aspect is of course my own personal taste but this story will be branching out a bit to have more variety. Sarah's characterization will bring some depth and hopefully more lewd.
Thanks again!
[Report This]Date: September 24 2021 1:06 AM Title: Broken Rule
Fantastic story! I cannot wait for more!
I love your word choice. It's very sophisticated and really brings out the detail of everything that is happening.
I also love Sarah so much haha. Dominant and totally absorbed in her pleasure of the situation!
The foot part in Chapter 2 was especially great. I loved all the details. I felt like I was there too haha.
Author's Response:
Hey man! Thank you so much for the review.
I'm glad to hear you appreciate the word choice. I try not to say the same word twice, at least within the same scene. I enjoy really describing what is happening instead of something like 'her foot crushed me'. Sarah is certainly most concerned with her pleasure, I will be swappig to her perspective in later chapters to spice things up a bit and elaborate.
I love shoeplay and I think it is a tad underrepresented here. I'm glad you enjoyed!
[Report This]Date: September 21 2021 5:05 PM Title: Broken Rule
Whoa!
First off, welcome to giantess world.
Second, I love the descriptive writing you make while at the library or about her feet. There's a lot of detail to be appreciated and it helps me understand the scene better.
The 3rd chapter was by far the most interesting. It was quite the unexpected turn of events to have this group of people at her mercy. Sure, this man's death was just an example to remind the new guy of his place.
Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm glad you like what's happened so far.
I have a lot of ideas, going to meander through different themes while sticking to violent/sadistic. I'll be posting more soon!