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Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 21 2021 4:49 PM Title: When The Pressure Gets To You

I like the start of this story. It's always interesting to see a tiny plan something out and it doesn't go their way. 

Also, I like how quickly she wants him to serve her. I thought she might be curious or wonder how he got into this situation, but it seems she made up her mind so easily. 

Next chapter looks like it will be lots of fun and I can't wait for it!

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