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Reviewer: TheTinyJosh Signed [Report This]
Date: September 12 2021 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 2

This is an amazing chapter Joyce! It's setting everything up so perfectly! I can't wait for how Aaron's story progresses!  I'm really loving Kristina's personality as well. Playful, but also a dedicated friend who knows when to be serious!

When do you think chapter 3 will be available on GiantessWorld?

Reviewer: Gokuto Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2021 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 1

This story seems cool and like it has a lot of potential. Hwen you mentioned intelligence expansion in the description akin to Blemish on the Curb, i got a little worried. Because one of my main issues of that story, was how the implied condescension seemed to get annoying after a little while, almost like it overstayed its welcome. Hopefully, stuff like that is avoided here. Good luck!

Reviewer: TheTinyJosh Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 28 2021 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love the set up of this story so much. The scene with the writing on the wall and then the train conductor provided so much mystery. And I love the little tease in the final few sentences. I just know this story is going to be awesome and can't wait to read about what Aaron experiences!    



Author's Response:

Aw, thanks so much for the comment, TheTinyJosh!  I'm glad to hear that the story is intriguing so far! <3 

Reviewer: somerandomguy7 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 27 2021 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

I wonder if this will end up having a "good" ending? Like his friends tease and humiliate him, but are still nice and gentle with him. I know your other works aren't like that, but I'm hoping for something like that.



Author's Response:

It's all up to the commissioner :)  This is a long-term story, so we'll see <3 

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