Date: September 12 2021 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
This is an amazing chapter Joyce! It's setting everything up so perfectly! I can't wait for how Aaron's story progresses! I'm really loving Kristina's personality as well. Playful, but also a dedicated friend who knows when to be serious!
When do you think chapter 3 will be available on GiantessWorld?
Date: August 28 2021 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story seems cool and like it has a lot of potential. Hwen you mentioned intelligence expansion in the description akin to Blemish on the Curb, i got a little worried. Because one of my main issues of that story, was how the implied condescension seemed to get annoying after a little while, almost like it overstayed its welcome. Hopefully, stuff like that is avoided here. Good luck!
Date: August 28 2021 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
I love the set up of this story so much. The scene with the writing on the wall and then the train conductor provided so much mystery. And I love the little tease in the final few sentences. I just know this story is going to be awesome and can't wait to read about what Aaron experiences!
Aw, thanks so much for the comment, TheTinyJosh! I'm glad to hear that the story is intriguing so far! <3
Date: August 27 2021 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 1
I wonder if this will end up having a "good" ending? Like his friends tease and humiliate him, but are still nice and gentle with him. I know your other works aren't like that, but I'm hoping for something like that.
It's all up to the commissioner :) This is a long-term story, so we'll see <3