Reviewer: icefestival Signed [Report This]
Date: January 25 2023 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 41: Begin Again

I agree with maya, winter is best

How long does ramen take to cook?

More plot and character development. (Good character wise but not on the plot)

Hopefully "Whenever that is," (Viper07). comes soon

Random thoughts
Will they discover aiden on her?
Will they take her captive?
If captured will aiden help her escape?
Did Lynette create a shrink powder to shrink Maya? (Probably no)
Did Lyza hire them to recapture Maya? (Probably no)
Will Lynette regain aiden?
And the obvious, will Maya die and is that how part 3 starts? (Hopefully no)

Remember a chapter and response are always appreciated. Good Luck in college and i'll see you in the next Review/Comment (Definitely Unbiased)