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Reviewer: icefestival Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 18 2023 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 40: Sometimes all we can strive for is 'good enough'

Character Development - 10

Chance of lyza falling asleep - 50% (I don't know when the time frame is but most people get of from work before nightime)

Si-Aiden's injuries - 40%

misspelling - 2 (letters) out of 47583738

Lyza gonna be mad - 100.1%

This story is rated i for ice likes it

Hopefully laptop activates GigaChad and doesn't messup again

Also if this is to long of a comment "FITE ME!"


[IMPORTANT] Will part three be on this page still or on a new one? (Very excited for a new name)


Did I mention that I like the 3 parts? "Hm, must've slipped mah mind!"

"Anywhoooo, you know the rules by this point" A response and chapter "are always appreciated." -And happy writing

Author's Response:

Part 3 will be on the same page as 1 and 2, though do plan for it to be the smallest of the 3 parts. I imagine maybe 5-6 more chapters for 2. It's proving to be the lengthiest of the 3 XD. I do plan, however, to go on something of a minor break before beginning part 3. Giving myself time to plot it out, work out what I need and focus on school as well as other stories I work with. 

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