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Reviewer: icefestival Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 20 2022 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 39: What Use Are Dreams?

Very nice chapter lots of plot twisting and people twisting

Definitely one of the better outcomes (we can't have si- I mean aiden dieing can we)

Is the Bolded part of the "Chapter end notes" part of the story?
-if it's not is it a rick astley reference?
-if it is who has the gun?(I think Lyza but maybe not)

Also the way you write is similar to my friend

Very long chapter my happy meter has increased

Also new catch phrase, nice
-write a chapter and response if you're Viper07/enjoyed

Depending on when you read this. good night, good afternoon, good morning and have a merry christmas.
-or not "I ain't yer moma"

And 10 stars for the star

Author's Response:

Aiden is someone who, I'd say, is veeeery familiar with death by this point lol. That doesn't mean he still can't get scared, especially when it's Maya doling out the execution. Suppose there are worse ways to go though. As always, happy to see you here Ice. 

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