Reviewer: icefestival Signed [Report This]
Date: October 04 2022 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 37: Her Obsession Part 1

Drawing a blank is the best. Unless your actually drawing, in which you leave it blank.

I love how aiden is getting the totally wrong vibe from maya. Mentally preparing for death in all. I mean being mental prepared can be convenient.

Also it's great how you described the stomach. Most people over describe it and make it inaccurate but you gave the right amount of detail to make it seem very realistic.

One thing tho how did the suit get on him when he was growing and how did she make it fit properly?

Excited to see the sushi situation though. Very excited indeed.

Also your story is cool and I love it!