[Report This]Date: August 24 2022 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 33:Just When Things Were Bad Enough
Alpha Beta in a Nutshell:
Maya Kills boyfriend. Boyfriend shrinks, is invincible and has new name Six. Maya and girlfriend torture Six for a while. Six fights maya and lives with roxxane. Roxxane fixes six to be taller. Six makes horrible plan to get info from Lynette. Lynette is Psycho. Maya finds six.
Alternate story ending:
After maya spotted Six he screamed. Lynette then looked down and saw him. Thinking he wanted to cheat getting to her room she raises her foot and slams it on him as hard as she can. Despite his partial Invincibility He is crushed. After this Maya snaps and kills Lynette. Maya then kills every beta in the building. Right before killing the last one she looked at the beta. As she smashed him she saw he looked like six and had a mental break down over the fact her one and only was dead. In her Depressed state she kills herself. After which Lyza takes lynettes place of power and kills roxxane.
Alternate ending:
Maya takes back six after shrinking lynette. After having some "fun" she returned six to Roxxane. Roxxane then used the grow formula to grow back six. Lyza then filled Lynettes place of power but is assasinated. Maya trys to get Six's forgiveness but he doesn't forgive her. In her foolishness she shrinks herself and gives herself to him. Six takes care of maya. Over time they started to bond and six unshrunk maya. After not being able to kill people for so long Maya doesn't get pleasure from it and doesn't kill anyone else ever again. Six gave maya a second chance and maya took it. After about a year of dating they got married and had 7 kids. Each one and a half years apart. They were Gentle like there father, confident like there mother and were venomous, like a viper, when mad.
Happy writing and a free 10 star review.
Author's Response:
Those are some well-thought-out alternate endings for the story. As it is, things ain't ending quite just yet though for the group. Each one of them is subject to some rather substantial changes. We're at the halfway point now and things are only liable to pick up from here.
[Report This]Date: August 20 2022 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 33:Just When Things Were Bad Enough
There were some really close calls there. And that was a perfect way to integrate maya back into the plot. Anyways good job with the corn flakes and happy writing. And for a bonus i'll give you a 10 star review.