[Report This]Date: March 25 2022 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 19: Trying Is All We Can Ask
Your story is so great that even though you post slow I think it is worth it
Author's Response: I'm glad that you think so! I hope to post more consistently at least at some point though lol!
[Report This]Date: March 20 2022 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 19: Trying Is All We Can Ask
Alright, I’ve now caught up. And I have to say this story is written quite well. To a great detail and full of a good balance of when to have plot or fetish content.
The characters I was a bit shaky on at the start, but they all grow on you. Especially 6, Maya, and Maya’s girlfriend. Or the main trio I guess you could say. Cruelty is obviously a focus on this story, especially the emotional kind. Which even while I personally am not the biggest fan of, I can easily see it’s written well. No complaints there.
If anything the biggest complaint I can give is the same complaint I would give myself on my own stories, which is to watch out for spelling and grammar errors. I think I can identify at least a couple per every 2-3 chapter. Though if small grammar errors is the biggest issue we have, then we are still far in the green. Anyway, hope to see more. And am especially loving the more balanced relationships of the main trio.
Author's Response: I'm glad to hear that you think the story is well written, even if it isn't something you're a fan of. Grammar continues to be an issue I deal with but I like to think I'm improving in that regard. It's nice to see that you enjoyed the story and the relationships. I hope that I can improve further to make the story even more enjoyable!