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Reviewer: Twinchy2Ember2Tian Signed [Report This]
Date: October 02 2006 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

There's...like none of the things that you put as categories. Body adventure? Butt? etc..? categories correctly :P It was a good start...would have been tons better if you could have made it longer

Author's Response: I might have been looking at hte wrong line. When i was adding in my stories i had them all written out on paper as to what is in each story. i will have to re-read it this weekend and correct it.

Reviewer: Nami Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 04 2006 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hmmm, interesting story. I would have liked to see it developed a little more but it was a fun read.

Author's Response: thanks Nams....:P

Reviewer: SolSolari Signed [Report This]
Date: March 04 2006 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hmmm.....  something doesn't seem to be working because there is no story here.


Author's Response: thats weird....it seems to be working now. It could have been an issue with the viewing problem.

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