Date: September 04 2021 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 8
I noticed you have not been posting as frequently as you have been. Allow me to say any criticism I remarked about your writing was simply about your grammer or confusion relating to who is saying what {Try reading Herman Melville's "Moby Dick" or William Golding's "Lord of the Flies", who the heck is saying what? Yet they are literary classics}. All that is just grammer based confusion.
Your story content is exceptional, bar none.
The concept of Morgan cutting off limbs, leaving Jim effectively a worm or a grub before Allison and Sam is a fantastic GIANTESS / shrunken relationship. It really hits home with those that see women as Above and Bigger than themselves; basically as an insect before her greatness.
You are hitting on all the right cylinders with this story. Please do not abadone it just because a few of us quiped in the comments section. Write as your heart delights.
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Date: August 28 2021 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 8
Another great chapter; but you have to slow down and proofread your work. You accidentally mixed up names {as you did at the very end of the last chapter}.
Fantastic story line regardless. Allison's conversion from sympathetic to vindictive is wonderful.
Can not wait for Sam to buttplug "Steve". Really, that's like the cherry on the sundae of this story so far.
The only real change I would consider, of course not part of your established story, is that there are microscopic airholes in the plastic dome for him to smell where he is at inside of any woman {of particular interest whether in Allison's pussy or Sam's asshole}. Perhaps, in remembrance to Jim under the clear planter, a small hole at the very tip
You wrote about the women walking Roxy around town with Jim on her back. This sounds like an incredible oppurtunity to showplace public disgace and humility with female dominance and indifference towards a horrible man. I am hoping you write about this public walk of shame in detail.
Can't wait for your next chapter.