Date: August 25 2021 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 6
Normally I wait between chapters to reply, however your last responce compeles me to relate a bit of advice another writer once told me.
When it comes to fantasy {as oposed to non-fiction} you have to write for yourself. Will you get 1,000,000,000,000,000 followers? No, but you will be able to express yourself to those, even if only a few, who share your interests, which is must more realistic.
After all, isn't it those, even if few in number, you are trying to connect with. Even if no one, not one single person connects with you; aren't you still voicing yourself regardless?
Write for yourself, and always remember in non-fiction the only audience is ultamitely yourself.
BTW, I love the bug cage. Especially with the handle, that is amazing. {You might want to consider an image of the bug cage included in the story, along with images of the next two unknown items. It would add to the story but not infringe upon copywrites if you just note them as not associated}.
Again, with fiction write for yourself, as opposed to non-fiction write for your audience. Let loose, go wild, and above all HAVE FUN.
Date: August 24 2021 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 6
I have to admit, this is one of the best ongoing stories I have read in a while.
I also have to admit I just started two stories structured upon this particular story. I shall have to confess aspiration of those stories based upon your story.
You simply left so many possibilities open that this terrific story has endless possibilities. KUDOS!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the nice words, DW. If I'm being honest I probably wouldn't have uploaded anything beyond chapter one without your encouragement. I've been a reader of this site forever but my kind of stories seem like such a niche inside a niche inside a niche....I knew nothing I write could get popular but I just did it as an experiment on the off chance SOMEBODY liked similar themes. If at least a few people enjoy it I might keep it going. I have a mountain of ideas for where this one could go as well as how it could become a series, as well as totally different story ideas too. No idea if I'll ever write any of it down but for now, with this one, I think I have at least a few more chapters in me. So, thanks again. Chapter 7 in a few days.
[Report This]Date: August 24 2021 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 6
I believe the chapters get replaced. That's what I heard on this website's discord server.
Also, loving the frequent updates. Haven't seen much punishment lately. Mostly, it's been discussions between the ladies on what to do with Jim. Hopefully Sam and Morgan put forth those ideas soon.
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
You're not wrong, but things are about to get a LOT worse for poor Jim starting now. Thanks for the nice words.