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Reviewer: D W Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2021 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 2

Very nice!  What a great story.  The way you drew out Jim's guilt was done masterfully, as was Allison's awakening / conversion to the thruth about Jim not loving her.

Can't wait to find out just how small Allison now "desires" Jim to be.

Also of note, Morgan's indifference to the ongoing situation knowing that she was right, well done.

Reviewer: TomSpeedy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: August 12 2021 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 2

I really love the setup to this story.

Its simple, easy to understand, and somewhat funny how Jim can't seem to cum from a 15min blowjob. Lol. 

I'm really curious what Allison said to Morgan at the end. Hopefully it's something about keeping Jim small. 

Now I could imagine Allison using Jim as a sex toy and Jim is disgusted by the whole thing and now that he's small, he can't do anything about it. 

Well, I can't wait for the next chapter!

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