Date: August 29 2021 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 1
As I have written in the past I LOVE this story. I liked the introduction of Sam too. The only issue that I have is that this is getting a bit too violent with the discussion of amputating Jim/Steve's limbs. How can Allison be that mean to go along with this?
I vote for a last minute repreive with Morgan either enlarging the dildo a bit with magic or they trick him into shrinking again so he will fit inside. Maybe the threat of amputation will convince him to voluntarily shrink himself. I think if he ends up as an amputee in a dildo then the story is pretty much over. Hope you don't mind the comments just my honest opinion.
[Report This]Date: August 28 2021 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, so fucked up but I'm loving where this is going. Maybe they could use him without the capsule too, you know, bareback. Just something to consider. Also, as much as I enjoy their cruelty so far, I hope it evolves as he does. Girls tend to find little helpless things cute. I could only imagine how humiliated he would feel if that turns out to be the case once he's de-limbed.
Date: August 24 2021 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
I was iffy on the concept so I put off reading this. Now I wish I had been along for the ride from the start. Real good stuff, can't wait to see more.
Date: August 18 2021 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE this story! Humiliation and great character tension and chemistry is so hard to get right and you just mail it. All the little touches like Morgan whistling the oompah loompah song to further tease him are so spot on. Can't wait to read more!!
Date: August 14 2021 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great premise and story. I really enjoyed it and I can't wait to find out what Allison whispered as well as Jim's fate. I was thinking that Allison and Morgan would just have dinner and she wouldn't stop his shrinking to the next day when we has only a few inches tall but now with your chapter 2 ending who know what will happen. Please post chapter 3 soon! Thanks.
Date: August 12 2021 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 1
Thanks, good feedback. Was my first story, I can see your point. Second chapter soon.
Date: August 12 2021 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Great story and very interesting concept. Can't wait to read more.
Only gripe, your paragraph structure overlaps different subjects and commentors, making it a bit odd to follow who is saying what. One can still read through it; but better deligniations between who is saying what would be helpful.
Beyond that, a really good story full of lots of possibilities. Please continue.