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Reviewer: Theresa Yuen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 15 2021 3:16 PM Title: A Helping Hand

I’ve read your story, “A Helping Hand”. I’m engrossed by the thorough details of the digestive process. Even though Tanja has a rather unhealthy diet, as most soft drinks are bad for her body.

Reviewer: petrichor Signed [Report This]
Date: August 14 2021 7:23 AM Title: A Helping Hand

I'm glad I read this to the end. I seriously thought this was going to be one of those gushy, SM stories that don't interest me. Maaaan, I'm glad Tanja ate that nerd.



Author's Response:

Thanks, glad to see the plot twist actually worked. I had feared it could be too obvious who she is, but looks like it all went as intended! ;)

Reviewer: free Signed [Report This]
Date: August 05 2021 5:38 PM Title: A Helping Hand

Hi vortexI just finished reading your story. I think Thomas is lucky to be eaten by Tanja. a beautiful and sensual girl. Very good description of Thomas in the belly of this girl who makes the reader feel in his place. I think you are a talented author who masters writing that's why I suggest you write much longer stories because the reader really imagines themselves to be in the shoes of the characters and it's sad when such a well-written story ends quickly. You can for example take several of your stories and rewrite them into one by putting the characters together in the same environment... So I encourage you to write longer stories. And then your English is very correct. It is well translated by google translate. Finally I ask if you can send me links to other stories or authors who have inspired you or who write like you. Well done vortex. I am waiting for your answer.P.S. I searched the net and found a photo that I think represents Tanja. A blonde girl with clear eyes. What do you think? https://www.pinterest.ru/pin/802203752348247598/    



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for your kind words! :) I know what you mean, and I'm experimenting with the idea of longer stories here, since this one will be continued as soon as I find the time. As for authors that had an influence on me - I'd say those are ElPortero, Zombie Slave, observer, girlfood, oishi1, French_snack and supernova, to name only a few. I've been asked before how Tanja and the others characters look like exactly, but I don't usually narrow that down to certain pictures because that is one of the great things about writing: I provide a basic description, and based on that, it's up to the readers' imagination!

Reviewer: Lupe Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2021 3:06 AM Title: A Helping Hand

I concur. This was a a amazing read especially with the details and the amount of teasing that she does. Not many people talk about the digested becoming part of their bodies, and her butt no less, so that was awesome to read. 

 

Thank you for putting this out there!



Author's Response:

Thanks! I try to cover as many aspects of vore as possible in my stories, and that's indeed something I've seen very rarely in other writing.

Reviewer: GhostWriter44 Signed [Report This]
Date: July 29 2021 2:44 AM Title: A Helping Hand

Oh my god, this is one of those stories that I'm gonna re-read an infinite amount of times and always wish I could read it for the first time again. Bravo. That's all I can say. I know I say this in a lot of my reviews on stories but this is one that I really, truly, absolutely NEED a continuation. Regardless, I can't wait to see what you write next!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the high praise! People seem to be liking the story, so I will definitely continue it when I find the time.

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