[Report This]Date: July 13 2021 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
Called it, it was just so obviously written out before me. Please know it is a huge compliment I give, when I say that reading this final chapter sent chills down my spine.
I knew Brian would be killed, devoured by Shelby, and of course it's hot af to me, but at the same time I couldn't help but feel sad over it. Of course his wife now suffers as her husband dies beside her, and she's painfully unaware of the even more sickening fate on the other end of Shelby's television.
Would have been nice to see a longer scene in her stomach, more thoughts and flashing back of his life etc. perhaps but otherwise absolutely fantastic story. The idea was great, the characters written well in my opinion, just amazing.
Also I realize who this character actually reminds me of now, aside from Synestra it is actually Sabrina in my Prudence series that reminds me of Shelby, absolutely heartless and and an insatiable hunger, probably why I love her so much haha.
Maybe let her know she can check out my YouTube channel sometime and give me a ring through the television, I'll be fun for her... ;)
Great story, thank you. 10/10 will read again.
Author's Response:
Thanks for all your comments, I'm really glad you liked the story so much, and it's encouraging to see such reviews. It may be a world I'll revisit later!