[Report This]Date: July 13 2021 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
Called it, it was just so obviously written out before me. Please know it is a huge compliment I give, when I say that reading this final chapter sent chills down my spine.
I knew Brian would be killed, devoured by Shelby, and of course it's hot af to me, but at the same time I couldn't help but feel sad over it. Of course his wife now suffers as her husband dies beside her, and she's painfully unaware of the even more sickening fate on the other end of Shelby's television.
Would have been nice to see a longer scene in her stomach, more thoughts and flashing back of his life etc. perhaps but otherwise absolutely fantastic story. The idea was great, the characters written well in my opinion, just amazing.
Also I realize who this character actually reminds me of now, aside from Synestra it is actually Sabrina in my Prudence series that reminds me of Shelby, absolutely heartless and and an insatiable hunger, probably why I love her so much haha.
Maybe let her know she can check out my YouTube channel sometime and give me a ring through the television, I'll be fun for her... ;)
Great story, thank you. 10/10 will read again.
Author's Response:
Thanks for all your comments, I'm really glad you liked the story so much, and it's encouraging to see such reviews. It may be a world I'll revisit later!
Date: July 13 2021 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
I absolutely love Shelby, man she is evil. Reminds me of Synestra in my own story, just absolutely heartless and cruel and demented... Just my kind of giantess ;)
This answered all of my questions at least, it does seem to implement time manipulation somehow, and though I may not get a clear answer it is enough for everything to fall into place.
It seems the next chapter is the last, and admittedly, I've wasted my work time reading this because I've become absolutely infatuated with this story... And though I feel bad for Brian and hope he finds a way to survive, I also kinda like the idea of Shelby devouring him mercilessly xD
Date: July 13 2021 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 3
Oh my gosh... This is brilliant. So now it seems these miniature treats give some kind of health benefits and weight loss perhaps? Interesting. And now Shelby has discovered that teleporting already dead stars works without any consequences... The story thickens...
Question still remains as to why the others stars died at all, and right off the bat! So strange, but does this mean she could take Isla Carr multiple times? Or are they erased from the show almost? So many questions, I'm wondering how they'll all get answered in five chapters total but maybe the story doesn't end there, can't wait to find out x)
[Report This]Date: July 13 2021 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, absolutely fascinating. Disregard my earlier review comment about 2" and greater, that was one hot vore scene. Absolutely cruel and heartless, I love it! You described it great, made it absolutely believable, and I had no doubts that Shelby was capaple of swallowing that woman whole even at 6"
Now I'm curious, did the celebrities die in real life AFTER they went through the television? Or did they die in real life after dying in Shelby's stomach in their shrunken form? It wasn't quite clear, but either way this is giving me DEATH NOTE vibes and I fucking love it.
You speed along pretty quickly, the ending makes me think we're about to see a time jump, so I'm curious to see which direction this will head in.
I've read enough to give you a rating now, at least for the last two chapters, this is a 5/5 for me it is extremely creative and well written (minus some irregular sentence structures but nothing that is too distracting)
Great job, I look forward to my future free time to read more of this story!
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm so glad you like it and took the time to comment! There's a little bit more detail on how the deaths work as you progress, you'll have to wait and see, and I hope you enjoy the rest!
Date: July 13 2021 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
Not many stories here intrigue me to even click them, but needless to say your title piqued my curiosity.
Very interesting premise, and what started as skimming the story turned to reading it more thoroughly as it caught my interest.
I love evil women, especially ones that don't realize they're evil until given the opportunity, so I am quite interested in seeing what Shelby will do with this six inch woman. Not usually into anything that involves over 2" but I'll give this one a shot anyways. Very interesting!