Date: June 21 2021 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 1 Download
Amazing story love it goes a litle fast as people mention but Im still so happy to be reading it love these kinds of stories just a touch more filler and a little more descriptions and you will be on a majour winner
[Report This]Date: June 19 2021 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 1 Download
Love the story so far, initially wasn't a fan of the short chapters but the ass one was lengthy and full of great content. Was kind of hoping that Ms Lopez would figure out his identity but maybe that's still cooking for you. Was curious if you ever planned to do a nose or ear chapter? And of not could youa86;a039;
Date: June 18 2021 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 1 Download
An interesting story, I'm a fan of shrinking out of clothes so I thought I'd like this one a lot and while it has its good points I think you went way too fast. I understand the desire, heck if you read my long ago abandoned story you'll see I too want to rush too often. Still that takes some of the fun out of the story as a huge portion of the fun in a giantess story is imagining the sensations, so just saying "he was nude, she was nude" etc. isn't as fun. Its better to describe how it feels to be getting smaller and to have your clothes balooning around you, how the girl looks nude (or better yet having her strip for him).
You mention in your reviews that your the only one who reads these before posting, may I suggest you find someone on the site (or someone you trust with relveaing this part of your sexuality too) to serve as your beta reader. They go through and point out grammar mistakes as well as make reomcendations on how you can prove before you post. It takes longer to update that way but the updates you do post are so much better then.
Thanks for writing this story and I hope my criticism wasn't too harsh
PYS
Author's Response:
Hi i apriciate your feedback on the story and you bring up some good points, this is my first story so there is a bit of a learning curve and also im just doing this for fun right now but i still wil try to improve on any flaws. i think your point about expanding on how people shirnk is a good idea so i may try to test that out, it may be a little bit until you see these changes in the actual story while i test them out. once again thanks for the feedback
Date: June 17 2021 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 1 Download
Thanks! Matthew's Match was actually my commission lol. Final part is on the way!
Date: June 16 2021 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 1 Download
great start looking forward to seeing more love these style of stories
Date: June 16 2021 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 1 Download
i acidentlly removed a review from johnsmith10992 i wanted to apolagize for this i was trying to delete my responce and add an updated version.
johnsmith10992 i apriciate your critism and have already begun to make some changes i have actually read a few of your stories and i wanted to thank you for what you said as this is my first story and im the only one who reads it before hand so its nice to have people willing to give there point of view so that i can improve in the future, a propper chapter 2 will be out soon and again im sorry for removing your comment
[Report This]Date: June 15 2021 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 1 Download
great start! look forward to seeing where you take this
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, Your story is one of the best i have ever read on this site so i Apriciate your suport
Date: June 15 2021 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 1 Download
Good start. Some grammar errors, but perfectly readable. Looking forward to seeing where you take this!
Author's Response:
I'm not the best with grammer but i will always try to fix any problems i see