Date: October 07 2021 9:27 AM Title: Heading Home From School
Interesting story. First off, Leah is an unique giantess. She's smart, yet a tad clumsy, which makes her engagements unpredictable and that adds to the variety of each way a tiny is dealt with. Good stuff.
I like how you described Leah being all excited in beginning as soon as she got home. The moment of fumbling the keys into the door, the scramble up the stairs, just shows that this isn't a routine arrival for her. Leah was determine today. Maybe a little too much. Lol
Immediately, we see Leah end Joey with her ass. Poor dude must've felt each step on the way to her house and got too dizzy to realize what even happened, haha. And her reaction that her jeans got ruined being the priority made things funny.
When she unboxes the other 3 tinies, I liked how she described what happened to Joey to them. However, I think it backfired because 2 of them decided to escape. Leah doesn't seem to mind this, probably because Chris is the one she wanted and he didn't run like the other guys.
One guy gets crushed, and the other suffocates in spit. I gotta admit. I haven't seen a spit scene in a while, so that's kinda cool.
Meanwhile, Chris is chilling on the laptop and I guess he isn't scared of Leah despite her murdering 3 tinies in front of him. Sure, he's entranced by her, but I guess I was expecting him to make some sort of move or at least debate on whether he should stay or run.
After killing the other guys, Leah is horny to be alone with Chris. She gives him a strip tease and Chris begins masturbating to this. Leah then seems super excited by this which made me wonder. Didn't Leah find it disturbing to think of random tinies jacking off to her while she was in her house? I ask this because when Chris starting masturbating, I was expecting Leah to be angry at him, so I'm guessing that Chris is an exception since Leah likes him.
Then there is the sex scene. Now this was good. Chris starts using his hands on her clit and the descriptions of his efforts were so vivid and her thoughts and reactions to this felt very sensual. You could tell how she was feeling when she wanted more pleasure and told him to bite. She wanted to feel him, and Chris gave what she wanted.
Loved how she coated him in her juices. That alone would turn Chris on, and suddenly, he starts sticking his dick back into her which made me laugh, but also entertained. Together they came and Chris gets crushed in the process. I mean, what a way to go, bravo. While, I do feel bad for Leah that she lost Chris, her last memory of him is giving her an amazing orgasm.
Great story and I can't wait for the next one!
Oh my gosh! Thank you so much for taking the time to give such detailed feedback, really can't express how much it means to me! I spent a lot of time mulling over this one, because its possibly one of my favorite scenarios I've wrote to date, and I wanted to nail it the best I could!
Yeah, so, the reason Leah is okay with Chris doing it is because there's a mutual attraction and chemistry already established between them. In fact, she was only originally planning to shrink Chris anyway, however the others got in the way. I certainly could have made that more clear! Sorry about the confusion!
I'm so glad you liked the descriptions especially, and extra glad you thought them to be sensual! Exactly what I was hoping for! ^_^
Date: October 06 2021 9:17 PM Title: Heading Home From School
This story is so good! I love the giant's tone of "Oh no I killed them :( oh well." It's so good and cruel! keep up the good work!
Thank you so much, really glad you enjoyed it! I really love that tone myself in stories, so I'm glad to hear someone else does as well c:
Date: September 29 2021 6:03 PM Title: Heading Home From School
I really enjoyed this read, it was nice to have so much variety in a shorter story. I'm secrelt hoping the tiny stuck in the spit lived to be crushed later on 😈
The descriptions were great, the increase in sexual tension building up was well paced. The ending was kinda cute, almost bittersweet.
Thank you so much! Its really nice to get a review on an older story <3
I'm glad you liked the build up, its always a pretty big focus for me in what I write! Totlly agree though that being crushed in spit is super hot!