[Report This]Date: June 02 2021 12:47 PM Title: Sonia
"Following the first two dynamax anomalies,[...]" Wait wasn't it stated in the first chapter that Gloria's supersized trip to Motostoke was far from the first Dynamax Anomaly? She knew immediately what was going on, without any confusion, making me believe that "DAs" were, though still new, common knowledge at this point.
"[...], hoping she could do something about it anyone got hurt." - This sentence seems incomplete, I cannot put my finger on it why exactly though.
"[...], slithering towards her like an ekans." - Nice one, I love if proverbs are changed to fit their respective fictional universe.
"The effect that was only heightened by everyone down there standing paralyzed as they stared in shock If they hadn't been prepared for this possibility, they'd have been running and screaming already." - You are missing a comma (or more likely a point due to the spelling) between "shock" and "If".
"That meant giant and normal-sized people would have to learn to live with each other." At least the Anomalies don't leave the newborn giants "stranded" at their newfound size. It could be even worse. | Edit: Looks that I spoke to soon, at least somewhat.
Sonia's thought process showed that she really is a scientist down to her very heart. She isn't afraid of new developments even if they seem scary and dangerous at first, she immediately sees past the threat and ponders possibilities.
But even if she manages to "tame" the Anomalies that way, wouldn't that cause a two-class society and create a literally gigantic rift between those that can grow and those that cannot? Granted, people woould still be hit by Anomalies and thus switch from one camp to another, but still. That seems way more dangerous than some unpredictable godly power running amok...