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Reviewer: 2KFSK Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 24 2021 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

You've got a really engaging story on your hands. The English is a little hard to follow, though. If you'd like, I'd gladly proofread it for you.



Author's Response:

Hello! The language barrier may make communication difficult, but I would be grateful if you would point out the problems of my text.

Reviewer: Dawger2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: April 23 2021 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

Woah! This is interesting! Will there be more?



Author's Response:

Hi, thank you for your positive feedback. Yes, the story is not over yet. At the moment, 11-12 chapters are planned.

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