Date: January 19 2022 5:11 AM Title: True Self
This was a great story and a rather original concept too! I read it all in one go and if you're planning to do more stories in this universe, I say go for it!
[Report This]Date: September 06 2021 2:34 PM Title: Stressed Out
Just a fantastic and creative story! Well done!
Date: September 05 2021 6:48 PM Title: Stressed Out
One of the best stories ever! In the next one, if similar, would be nice to read the rampage of more girls like Alana. It reminded me of the chapter 'impact' of brobdingnagian business by vivetta venray. Take a look at it
[Report This]Date: September 05 2021 11:00 AM Title: True Self
Damn!!!
Ok wow, there is a lot to unpack here.
I loved Jesse's clone rebellion, and how they were so organized and fought back.
I loved Ashley and her experiences, I loved the downfall of the Stress reducer company.
Suzanne's clone being tortured and killed by Ashley was just perfect karmic retribution (though I wish it was the real suzanne)
All through this story you've crafted a great and realistic world setting here, and characters I have enjoyed following along and getting to know.
Your description of size, traversing the world, interaction with giants, crushing, feet, emotions, etc.
All of it was so well done, and a real treat to follow along.
Binge reading through these multiple ending posts (great work on posting 3 chapters in one day by the way, I know that can be hard) was a bit of a struggle, but also rewarding to get to read this to the end.
This is a story I will definitely be re-reading in future a lot, as well as excited for any future stories set in this continuity you may write.
Thank you for sharing this.
[Report This]Date: September 05 2021 4:07 AM Title: Homestretch
Wow! This chapter was great (just as the previous ones have been)
You really ramped up the tension and even through in some action-esque feels.
I am so excited to read more, and see if Ashley will get away with this, maybe reveal the truth to the masses.
This was such a good read, kept me on the edge of my seat.
[Report This]Date: September 04 2021 3:42 AM Title: I Shrink, Therefore I Am
Loved this chapter!!
Cannot wait to read more. Especially since she plans to take them with her.
Will she succeed, or will Suzanne shrink her to avoid her causing trouble.
I loved how Suzanne rationalized everything and demonstrated the miller house)
There was a lot of great content in this chapter,
[Report This]Date: September 03 2021 5:39 AM Title: ... --- ...
Ok, so this has been a well written story so far, really enjoyed reading the buildup to this.
The cliffhanger was perfect as was the reveal!!!
Jesse now knows they are all clones and actual alive people with thoughts, feelings, emotions, and fear of death.
I cannot wait to see her further reaction in the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your words! I just sent the new chapter so wait no longer, I can't wait to conclude the whole story. Hope you enjoy the rest
Date: September 01 2021 11:56 PM Title: Stressed Out
This is a very intriguing idea! Would love to see how it develops.
Author's Response:
Thank you, I really loved the concept when I was preparing it and I had too many directions I could take it in. Hope you enjoy what comes later
[Report This]Date: March 16 2021 3:32 AM Title: Stressed Out
Not bad start, hasn't realy been done befor. But continue