Date: March 10 2021 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 1
" "Congratulations on the approval for human trials, Tiffany. We expect big things from you. No pun intended." He said with a rye smile."
Maybe that's on me as english isn't my first language, but as google didn't produce anything useful either I will just ask: What is a "rye smile" supposed to mean?
As far as the story goes: I wonder how fast Dave will shrink and whether Sarah or Tiffany will be the first person to humiliate him. (Albeit it would probably be unintentional in case of his girlfriend.)
I like it so far though. He being in a mad scramble to make it to the promotion before Tiffany makes it believable that he would do such a reckless thing.
Going by the tags Tiffany will also use her own concoction I wonder where that will lead... Maybe more than the just breasts expands in size?
"rye" is kind of an old term for like "smug" or like the kind of smile you make after you tell a dad joke.
and im still putting together an outline for the rest of the story, so any suggestions will be considered to be added.