Reviewer: vegetaboy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 28 2021 4:34 AM Title: Linda's Surprise/Amy Shrinks Brian and Neha/Don Drumpf

Things are starting to get interesting!! (even more so than before)

Some notes on the previous chapters. I love how Sophie is starting to care for Xue, can't wait to see how that plays out.

Linda having a nice big pair of feet to put Chad under is great :D She's going to fit the role of GTS very well.

Neha better watch her mouth, it's nice to see Assertive-Amy.

And I love Don and Alex flirting, I really hope they get together (another screw you to Don's father. Plus Alex is one hot gal, who deserves a loving partner too) 

Author's Response:

Thank you, glad you're enjoying the story!!

All I'll say is that a lot of exciting adventures coming up for all the characters ;)

And I'm liking the idea of Don and Alex as a couple.

Reviewer: Tiny_Significance Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2021 4:07 AM Title: One Year Later

Well, this sequel came much faster than i expected, and I am NOT complaining about that! ;) 

In the intro, I love all of the character introductions and how they sum up not only who they are, but where the first story left them in life. I especially, of course, love how you totally humiliate the Drumpfs in their descriptions. It's awesome. 

One character description in particular that I would like to point out is that of Topher. I, for one, would absolutelty LOVE to see some male giant action! It doesn't bother me at all. Having some M/f foot play and domination action thrown into this story will really spice things up in an awesome way. I especially love, of course, that he is being thrown into the subplot of my girls: Maria & Veronica~ <3 (I feel like I kind of helped inspire this idea in that one review I wrote on the first one, hehe ;) ) 

Seeing pretty little Veronica be toyed with under the feet of a handsome man will be so awesome. I would also love if Topher isn't just brought in by Maria for some casual fun. I hope that he and Maria's relationship really blossoms into something as romantic as Stephanie and Roger, but with both of them being dominant ;P 

If that's the case, then I really can't wait to see Veronica adapt to being a pet shared by a beautiful couple, being first and foremost devoted to her goddess Maria, but also now shared by Maria with a gorgeous man who she is totally unworthy of. Only Maria is worthy of having an actual relationship with a man, as Veronica is beneath her. A devoted little pet: first for Maria, and then with Maria's new boyfriend. Can't wait to see all of the erotic frustrations and releases that come with that. But again, I'm speculating lol 

Moving onto the actual content of the chapter... 

 

You started just as I had hoped... with Xue and her bug girl Sophie. 

You also had me at "Almost a full year". Oh god, that's hot. I just love that this is Sophie's life now. This little bratty beauty in the prime of her life is nothing other than a little slave to give pedicures and massages to, and a tiny toy to be played with by, the feet of a much older, and more deserving, woman. This first scene is so awesome as Xue completely dominates every second of her pets' lives. I love how Sophie has, while of course hating it, learned to be an obedient little pet for Xue, diligently painting her nails with all she has. All that she is good for. Then there's that curious little moment where Sophie actually takes pride in her work... I certainly hope that this is expanded upon, that maybe Sophie will eventually, truly break. in a way that doesn't take the fun out of it for Xue, of course. 

Then we take a break and catch a glimpse into our main girl Stephanie's life as a... vigilante? That's awesome! Can't wait to see if we can also get a glimpse into how Stephanie deals with her little victims ;) Also can't wait for Julie and Roger to come back into the story in person! ^^ 

Then, for the final part of the chapter, you take us right back to Xue and her pets. I am more than happy to receive, through her POV, confirmation that she is the dominant and playful milf that I love hehe. XD 

I just love how she dishes out rewards and punishments for her little pets because that's all they are. She is their owner. In particular, I love how Xue continually assures Sophie that she's "a good bug" and that she "make Xue proud". That kind of treatment will eventually break her little toy girl. I just know it! XD 

Sophie's submissiveness and obedience to Xue is also just too good. The way she timidly asks if she won't be punished and what Xue wants her to do the next day. The way she kisses her owner's foot on command without a second thought! Too awesome... 

I also really like that Xue shows Sophie off to her VIP clients. I can only imagine that pathetic little tiny girl being brought out of some humiliating place by her confident owner to be presented, like a prized possession or cute pet, to total strangers who probably immediately laugh and demean her and treat her like the slave and pet that she is. I can imagine Sophie uselessly trying to plead with them to save her just before they all, one by one, either watch as Xue does something with her or makes her do something humiliating or put their feet up in front of her expectantly as Xue allows. I certainly hope that we get to see some of these private VIP activities in the future~ 

 

This is just as good as I would hope it to be! And it's only a short first chapter! 

You are quickly becoming one of my favorite size fetish authors, and I cannot wait to see what you do with this! 

 

(As a side note, I kind of hope that Maria keeps her pet Veronica in a little cage or shoe box when she isn't playing with her hehe~ That would be hot) 

Author's Response:

Glad to hear that you enjoyed the character introductions - these were a lot of fun to write! And haha the Drumpfs have no redeeming qualities.

Admittedly, I'm still on the fence of whether Topher will make it in the final cut - trying to figure out how he'll fit in the story as a whole. But if Topher does, he'll play an important role.
But regardless - there will be a third person brought in to Maria and Veronica's love life. 
And yep your review gave me inspiration ;)

And of course I had to start the story with Xue ! She is the master at putting tinies in their place :D 
Since a year had passsed, I figured that Sophie would be broken down a little bit by now since all she has known are Xue and her feet. 

There are also plans for fun times with Sophie and VIP clients in future chapters!

Stephanie has a nice plan in place for each of her little victims - with her shrinking machine, she's simply trying to make the world a better place :)

Glad to hear that you enjoyed the first chapter and I really appreciate the compliment :D
I think you'll also enjoy the rest of "Nail Salon II". 

Reviewer: Rhineguy Signed [Report This]
Date: March 09 2021 3:17 AM Title: One Year Later

I love, love, LOVE! Starting the story with more Xue!

Author's Response:

Glad that you loved the chapter! And yes, Xue is one of the most skilled at dealing with tinies.