Date: June 06 2021 8:44 PM Title: Jason's New Life
Another superb chapter!
Still loving where this is going, and can't wait to see where things progress from here, both with Jocelyn and Candis. Feel free to discard if you already have plenty of plans, but maybe Candis could rope Jocelyn into helping her punish a few micros beneath both of their terrible feet, or even micros having to compare and judge the stench of the sisters' feet and shoes? Just some thoughts anyway.
Also, still absolutely enamoured by your sly inclusion of Candis' work shoes here and there, just to really build them up as the truly infamous threat they seem to be. Especially having her walk past Jason whilst wearing them, only for him to hear the cries of the poor micros trapped and suffering within. Really genius stuff!
Author's Response:
Thank you again! I do like that idea a little bit, not gonna lie. I do have a few plans for the future of the story and that one can be included. Having the two sisters interact and punish some unlucky micros with them forcibly smelling their feet. I can work it in to an already planned chapter so no need to go discarding it just yet.
Candis' red work shoes, they will make another come back in the next chapter. Can't promise the shoes will be ever present but those shoes have not been retired in the sense of Candis using them to end micros. No, the Red Shoes of Death have not crushed their last micro victims.
[Report This]Date: June 06 2021 6:16 AM Title: Jason's New Life
Quite the cliffhanger
Author's Response:
It leads a little bit into the next chapter, cliffhanger will hopefully be resolved shortly
Date: June 05 2021 7:22 PM Title: Jason's New Life
I love this so freaking much!! I dunno how I missed it when the first chapters were posted! Glad it's continuing! Candis is honestly one of my fave cruel giantesses now. and shrunken women is my favorite category of these stories so I'm glad to see a lot of action in that department lol. Can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I do plan on continuing this story and I do have some really fun ideas that I think everyone will enjoy. For Candis, she's a really fun character to write and we haven't seen the last of her or her sister with them torturing the micros they "own". I hope to see you soon as the story continues!