Date: August 21 2022 7:35 PM Title: Fall From Grace Part 4
So the justice has come to Grace!
Can't help, but feel a bit sorry that she was so stubborn and unable to accept the truth and redeem herself.
I have always liked her as an invincible monster, but she really did go too far with what she had done to Jisoo and Eren.
That seems like a fitting fate for her.
Happy to see that Jisoo has managed to let go of all hatred and awaken her powers and should now be able to keep everyone safe!
Gonna miss them devouring people xd, but it's for the better in this novel.
When the crime is a crime it's not so bad, but when it is actually justified and made accepted... That gets scary.
Let's see what happens next!
Author's Response: Unfortunately there won't really be too much more vore in the story if any at all since Jisoo has more or less abandoned that lifestyle, but still a lot of good interaction will come about in the following chapters as the story finally winds down!
Date: July 18 2022 12:49 AM Title: Fall From Grace Part 4
I remember an old sci-fi story about a computer that went renegade after developing artificial sentience. And a certain much-older saying (erroneously paraphrased by the computer, early on) would seem to be highly appropriate, here.
"Proudness precedes a precipitous plunge."
Author's Response:
"Prides comes before the fall."
[Report This]Date: July 16 2022 10:55 PM Title: Fall From Grace Part 4
Grace had this coming for a veeery long time. Kinda surreal though to see this once seemingly invincible woman be reduced to the very thing she's preyed on since her introduction. In her eyes, and even to her supposed family, she'd now be seen as even less than human. The very same humans they've mocked for so long.
Grace was given a punishment far worse than being killed, she was humbled. A false got cast down. What a wonderful wake-up call, not just for her but for the rest of the corporation. Oh, they'll be shaking in their boots now.
A wonderfully cathartic chapter.
Author's Response:
We will definitely get to Grace's mental state a bit later, after a few more events cement her new place in the social hierarchy that she considered herself the apex of! As Jisoo stated this is a fate worse than death for Grace, since to her power is everything and she considers it worse to be 'broken' rather than dead. Hence her earlier actions in the story where she was obsessed with proving she could 'break' people like Thomas and Alice.
And she's had this one coming pretty much since her introduction I think! It'll be exciting to get back to how her arc concludes in a few chapters.
[Report This]Date: July 15 2022 6:27 AM Title: Fall From Grace Part 4
We're not dealing with the average Fang warrior anymore. That's right, Jisoo has risen beyond the limits of the Fang bloodline, and into the realm of legend. The legend that Amita fears. The legend, known throughout the entire world, as the most powerful warrior to ever exist. She, Jisoo, has become the legendary Super Fang ... blah blah blah blah blah you get it. Then she slays the Jabbawocky and saves Narnia.
But enough about me, I'm just jealous of her Super Fang Swagger.
The scene where Eren is ... uh ... appreciating Jisoo's muscly form looming over the landscape (paying special attention to the thighs, abs and tracts of land), while he's a speck of sand to her, uh ... activates the neurons. Just for that, I'm punching in another five stars.
Author's Response:
It's fitting too because Jisoo's eyes glow gold just like a super saiyan's hair lol. Back in early planning of the story I contemplated having her hair turn gold whenever she grows but changed my mind since it seemed too on the nose and corny. Still might have it change colors to white, but that's not too much of a priority atm.
And thank you very much! I'm happy Jisoo's newfound abilities have only increased her appeal.
[Report This]Date: July 13 2022 9:23 PM Title: Fall From Grace Part 4
I just wanna say:
Karma always back
Author's Response:
Karma's a b*tch!